From dc4f113c8a83045cdd6776a5f36a66f741c6fd6c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christine Dodrill Date: Wed, 30 Sep 2020 14:51:03 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] fixes, thanks #homelab --- blog/how-mara-works-2020-09-30.markdown | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/blog/how-mara-works-2020-09-30.markdown b/blog/how-mara-works-2020-09-30.markdown index ffb410c..df2ec0d 100644 --- a/blog/how-mara-works-2020-09-30.markdown +++ b/blog/how-mara-works-2020-09-30.markdown @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ tags: Recently I introduced Mara to this blog and I didn't explain much of the theory and implementation behind them in order to proceed with the rest of the post. -There was actually a significand amount of engineering that went into +There was actually a significant amount of engineering that went into implementing Mara and I'd like to go into detail about this as well as explain how I implemented them into this blog. @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ the haters at 200 words per minute!](conversation://Mara/hacker) ## The Theory My blogposts have a habit of getting long, wordy and sometimes pretty damn dry. -I notice that there are usually a few common thereads in how this becomes the +I notice that there are usually a few common threads in how this becomes the case, so I want to do these three things to help keep things engaging. 1. I go into detail. A lot of detail. This can make paragraphs long and wordy @@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ case, so I want to do these three things to help keep things engaging. feel like a slog, and inserts some stickers between paragraphs to help keep things upbeat and lively. -I wanted to make a unique this with the concepts of Cool Bear's Hot Tip and the -Socratic Method with some furry art sprinkled in and I eventually arrived at -Mara. +I wanted to make a unique way to help break up walls of text using the concepts +of Cool Bear's Hot Tip and the Socratic method with some furry art sprinkled in +and I eventually arrived at Mara. [Fun fact! My name was originally derived from a Buddhist conceptual demon of